Tuesday, June 12, 2007

flash over substance

here's a haiku that coffeeshopgirl and i wrote for the friends who were in summer wedding #1 (and are now working their way through India's circus of stomach troubles). the first version is mine and the alternate version is coffeeshopgirl's. you can imagine which one i prefer...

excrement is key
to a long lasting marriage
you're both full of it

::alternate::
excrement is key
to a long lasting marriage
buy stock in pepto

morning drive observation: there was a guy walking on the streets of buckhead wearing duckhead (shorts).

and now back to being industrious at octane

1 comment:

Dave and Jo said...

my rejoinder:

Pepto is the key
but so is lots of TP
without it our hands